Buffy the Vampire Slayer fanfiction story (Chapter 1)
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:26 pm
It was a beautiful day in Sunnydale, California.
Birds were singing, the sun was shining, and everything was well in the world.
We slowly focus on a park where we see Dawn Summers out with her best friend Janice, her mother, and Janice’s baby sister Kara, just enjoying themselves.
But all of a sudden…
Janice’s Mother (playfully): Uh-oh. (sniffs, to Janice) Do you smell what I smell, honey?
Janice (giggles): Oh, yeah. Definitely. (sighs) Kara definitely needs changing.
Janice’s Mother (smiles): I thought so. She always gets that look every time she needs a change.
Dawn looks a little uncomfortable during the diaper-changing conversation.
Janice (smiling): I can change her, Mom.
Janice’s Mother (curious): You’re sure?
Janice (grins): Yeah, no problem.
She begins taking Kara over to a table and, after laying a towel on it, lays her down on it, beginning to undo her clothes.
Dawn walks over to Janice, as she continues to change Kara’s diaper.
Dawn: Um...Janice?
Janice (smiling down at Kara, but speaking to Dawn): Yep?
Dawn: Um...I can...change her if you want.
Janice stops changing her sister and looks at Dawn, but still keeping a hand on Kara’s stomach.
Janice (unsure): You’re sure? She’s not very comfortable around other people.
Dawn (grins): I can calm her down, no problem. I’ve babysat lots of times.
Janice (worried): She can be a squirmer…
Dawn (scoffs): I’ve dealt with my share of squirming kids during my babysitting jobs.
Janice (smiles): Okay, Dawn. Go for it.
Janice kisses her sister on the forehead, then walks away.
Dawn immediately steps up to Kara and, after looking back and forth, seeing that they’re totally alone, looks back at Janice’s little sister, and continues changing her diaper where Janice left off.
As she changes her:
Dawn (lost in thought): You know what, kiddo? I want to tell you a secret. (smiles) I’d love to be a little kid again. No worries…nobody to push you around. I’d love to just relive it. If only for a little while, y’know?
She finishes changing her diaper and picks her up, holding her in her arms.
Dawn (smiles): I just think that’d be really cool.
She sets her back on the picnic table.
Voice (from behind her): That can be arranged!
Dawn spins around to see a demon with considerably large horns, thick, blue, pale skin, and a wand in his hand.
Demon: You will know what it feels like, Slayer!
Dawn (confused): “Slayer”? Wait! I’m not the--
The demon zaps Dawn with a wand.
Dawn (screams): Wait! No!
Her voice suddenly gets higher and she begins to shrink.
Dawn (squealing): No!!!
She begins to shrink even more.
Dawn (crying): No!!
She shrinks down so small, that her clothes she was wearing are covering her.
Meanwhile, back with Janice and her mother...
Janice’s Mother (confused): Shouldn’t Dawn have been done by now, honey?
Janice (giggles): Oh, you know Kara. She likes to fight.
Janice’s Mother: Still...I think we should check on her.
Janice and Janice’s mother go over to where Dawn and Kara were.
Dawn continues to wail.
Janice (wondering): Do you hear that?
Janice’s Mother (confused): Yes, I do…
Janice looks down at the pile of clothes.
Janice (gasps) (shocked): Oh my God!
She kneels down and picks up the now toddler Dawn.
Janice’s Mother (mystified): Is that...
Janice: I think so...
Janice’s Mother: We should get her back to your friend Buffy’s house.
Janice (worried for her friend): Wait, Mom! She’s totally naked!
Janice’s Mother (sighs): We don’t have any extra clothes, honey.
Janice (sighs): Well, we gotta give her a diaper, at least!
Janice’s mother begins looking through the diaper bag.
Janice’s Mother (sighs in exasperation): We’re completely out of diapers.
Janice (worried): Oh, man!
Janice’s Mother: We have to get her to Buffy’s!
Janice and her mother pack up everything, and, wrapping Dawn in a blanket, rush to Buffy’s house.
Meanwhile, at the nerd’s lair...
Jonathon: What the Hell was that?! The frickin’ demon just totally screwed everything up!
Andrew: It wasn’t my idea to get that demon to go by blood!
Jonathon: Well, if you hadn’t--
Andrew: If I hadn’t what?!
Jonathon: If you hadn’t--
Warren: Both of you shut up!
He sighs and begins pacing the floor.
Warren: Maybe this is gonna be better than we thought.
Andrew: What do you mean?! The demon got the Slayer’s sister! Not the Slayer!
Warren: Easy, Andrew. We’ll get the Slayer…one way or another. (evilly) I swear it!
The three cackle with laughter.
(Black Screen; Roll Opening Credits)
SARAH MICHELLE GELLAR as Buffy Summers
NICHOLAS BRENDON as Xander Harris
ALYSON HANNIGAN as Willow Rosenberg
AMBER BENSON as Tara Mclay
JAMES MARSTERS as Spike
ANTHONY STEWART HEAD as Rupert Giles
EMMA CAULFIELD as Anya
MICHELLE TRACTENBERG as Dawn Summers (Chapter 1 only)
Guest Stars
Markie Post as Janice’s Mother
Amber Tamblyn as Janice Penshaw
Danny Strong as Jonathon Levinson
Tom Lenk as Andrew Wells
Adam Busch as Warren Mears
Notes for this Chapter:
We learn that Dawn baby-sits in her spare time.
There is a small reference to Season 5’s “Blood Ties” and “The Gift” due to the “Summers blood”.
We find out that The Troika (Warren, Jonathon, and Andrew) are responsible for letting the demon loose.
Originally there was no actress set to play Janice’s mother, however once the writer was remembering the movie “There’s Something About Mary” realized that Markie Post would be good for the role.
This episode has the most guests than any other episode of “Buffy The Vampire Slayer” with several different stars, bringing in characters from all walks of life...from “Spider-Man” to “Gilmore Girls” to “Kill Bill”.
Birds were singing, the sun was shining, and everything was well in the world.
We slowly focus on a park where we see Dawn Summers out with her best friend Janice, her mother, and Janice’s baby sister Kara, just enjoying themselves.
But all of a sudden…
Janice’s Mother (playfully): Uh-oh. (sniffs, to Janice) Do you smell what I smell, honey?
Janice (giggles): Oh, yeah. Definitely. (sighs) Kara definitely needs changing.
Janice’s Mother (smiles): I thought so. She always gets that look every time she needs a change.
Dawn looks a little uncomfortable during the diaper-changing conversation.
Janice (smiling): I can change her, Mom.
Janice’s Mother (curious): You’re sure?
Janice (grins): Yeah, no problem.
She begins taking Kara over to a table and, after laying a towel on it, lays her down on it, beginning to undo her clothes.
Dawn walks over to Janice, as she continues to change Kara’s diaper.
Dawn: Um...Janice?
Janice (smiling down at Kara, but speaking to Dawn): Yep?
Dawn: Um...I can...change her if you want.
Janice stops changing her sister and looks at Dawn, but still keeping a hand on Kara’s stomach.
Janice (unsure): You’re sure? She’s not very comfortable around other people.
Dawn (grins): I can calm her down, no problem. I’ve babysat lots of times.
Janice (worried): She can be a squirmer…
Dawn (scoffs): I’ve dealt with my share of squirming kids during my babysitting jobs.
Janice (smiles): Okay, Dawn. Go for it.
Janice kisses her sister on the forehead, then walks away.
Dawn immediately steps up to Kara and, after looking back and forth, seeing that they’re totally alone, looks back at Janice’s little sister, and continues changing her diaper where Janice left off.
As she changes her:
Dawn (lost in thought): You know what, kiddo? I want to tell you a secret. (smiles) I’d love to be a little kid again. No worries…nobody to push you around. I’d love to just relive it. If only for a little while, y’know?
She finishes changing her diaper and picks her up, holding her in her arms.
Dawn (smiles): I just think that’d be really cool.
She sets her back on the picnic table.
Voice (from behind her): That can be arranged!
Dawn spins around to see a demon with considerably large horns, thick, blue, pale skin, and a wand in his hand.
Demon: You will know what it feels like, Slayer!
Dawn (confused): “Slayer”? Wait! I’m not the--
The demon zaps Dawn with a wand.
Dawn (screams): Wait! No!
Her voice suddenly gets higher and she begins to shrink.
Dawn (squealing): No!!!
She begins to shrink even more.
Dawn (crying): No!!
She shrinks down so small, that her clothes she was wearing are covering her.
Meanwhile, back with Janice and her mother...
Janice’s Mother (confused): Shouldn’t Dawn have been done by now, honey?
Janice (giggles): Oh, you know Kara. She likes to fight.
Janice’s Mother: Still...I think we should check on her.
Janice and Janice’s mother go over to where Dawn and Kara were.
Dawn continues to wail.
Janice (wondering): Do you hear that?
Janice’s Mother (confused): Yes, I do…
Janice looks down at the pile of clothes.
Janice (gasps) (shocked): Oh my God!
She kneels down and picks up the now toddler Dawn.
Janice’s Mother (mystified): Is that...
Janice: I think so...
Janice’s Mother: We should get her back to your friend Buffy’s house.
Janice (worried for her friend): Wait, Mom! She’s totally naked!
Janice’s Mother (sighs): We don’t have any extra clothes, honey.
Janice (sighs): Well, we gotta give her a diaper, at least!
Janice’s mother begins looking through the diaper bag.
Janice’s Mother (sighs in exasperation): We’re completely out of diapers.
Janice (worried): Oh, man!
Janice’s Mother: We have to get her to Buffy’s!
Janice and her mother pack up everything, and, wrapping Dawn in a blanket, rush to Buffy’s house.
Meanwhile, at the nerd’s lair...
Jonathon: What the Hell was that?! The frickin’ demon just totally screwed everything up!
Andrew: It wasn’t my idea to get that demon to go by blood!
Jonathon: Well, if you hadn’t--
Andrew: If I hadn’t what?!
Jonathon: If you hadn’t--
Warren: Both of you shut up!
He sighs and begins pacing the floor.
Warren: Maybe this is gonna be better than we thought.
Andrew: What do you mean?! The demon got the Slayer’s sister! Not the Slayer!
Warren: Easy, Andrew. We’ll get the Slayer…one way or another. (evilly) I swear it!
The three cackle with laughter.
(Black Screen; Roll Opening Credits)
SARAH MICHELLE GELLAR as Buffy Summers
NICHOLAS BRENDON as Xander Harris
ALYSON HANNIGAN as Willow Rosenberg
AMBER BENSON as Tara Mclay
JAMES MARSTERS as Spike
ANTHONY STEWART HEAD as Rupert Giles
EMMA CAULFIELD as Anya
MICHELLE TRACTENBERG as Dawn Summers (Chapter 1 only)
Guest Stars
Markie Post as Janice’s Mother
Amber Tamblyn as Janice Penshaw
Danny Strong as Jonathon Levinson
Tom Lenk as Andrew Wells
Adam Busch as Warren Mears
Notes for this Chapter:
We learn that Dawn baby-sits in her spare time. There is a small reference to Season 5’s “Blood Ties” and “The Gift” due to the “Summers blood”. We find out that The Troika (Warren, Jonathon, and Andrew) are responsible for letting the demon loose. Originally there was no actress set to play Janice’s mother, however once the writer was remembering the movie “There’s Something About Mary” realized that Markie Post would be good for the role. This episode has the most guests than any other episode of “Buffy The Vampire Slayer” with several different stars, bringing in characters from all walks of life...from “Spider-Man” to “Gilmore Girls” to “Kill Bill”.
The reason there were no conclusion on the first two is because, with the first site, it was shut down, and, with the second, I kept getting nothing but bad reviews, I felt nobody wanted to continue reading it. 
I know I'll have at least two faithful readers. *points to you and Mommy Star* 