Mommy Star's requested poem...

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Baby Zantaras
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Mommy Star's requested poem...

Post by Baby Zantaras »

Lavender

Lavender,
A Beautiful flower,
of Blue and purple power,
A Delicate perfume
fills the room...

Your presence,
is like lavender...
A beautiful woman
of sensual power
waking up all my sense
as easy as the wave of your hand

When you are in the room,
I can’t help but think
of this perfume on you
and in a moment, the time of a wink,
gently caressing your flower
and make it bloom,
while I kiss you
over again and over...

Lavender,
A Beautiful flower,
of Blue and purple power...
Lavender,
A Beautiful woman,
of great loving power...

Hope you like it Star...
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Glen
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Post by Glen »

Hey baby Zan,
I cant speak for Star.. but I think it is great.

I like reading other peoples poetry and creative writing.. should be more of it I say!

Cheers
baby Glen
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DommyMommyScarlet
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Post by DommyMommyScarlet »

Yes, I think she will love it.It is a very beautiful poem Zan. :wink:
Mommy Star
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Thank you thank you thank you

Post by Mommy Star »

That is so beautiful. I feel so special to have such a talented, amazing baby. Thank you for sharing this with me.
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MommyJosie
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Post by MommyJosie »

wow zan. That was really good. I'm sure it made Mommy Star feel very special. You are such a sweet boy.
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