The Neighbor (fixed)

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ritzcritz
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The Neighbor (fixed)

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Sorry again if this looks a little messy, for some reason I can't get it to come up the way that I want javascript:emoticon(':cry:')

Please feel free to fix it, and continue where I left off, I'd love to see where someone takes this story =]

It was a night in April when we were getting heavy showers all week consecutively every night and Jame's mom and their neighbor Mrs.Binkly we're having a usually chat. Mrs.Binkly lived by herself for years due to the fact that her husband had passed away about 15 years prior so Jame's mother was good friends with her so that she wouldn't get lonely. She was a much older woman than Jame's mom, she was also a much bigger woman as well.
A normal night like no other, until my Jame's mom called him into the kitchen to ask me something. "You know, it would be very nice if you were to stay over Mrs.Binkly's house tonight, she would love for you to keep her company." But mommmm "you know what, you're going to do it no questions asked". Seeing as James was particularly tiny for his age, He usually never argued with anyone because of his size he got easily intimidated.
"We're going to have so much fun Jame's!" Mrs.Binkley said as they walked into her house. James wasn't too excited, but seeing as he was a boy and she was what could be considered elderly, he made sure not to show how unamused he was. "You go watch my tv while I get your room prepared for later. He watched Nick at Night for a good half hour before he couldn't help but notice that he saw a package of Huggies disposable diapers on a small table in her living room next to a shopping bag filled with various others things that he couldn't quite make out. He assumed maybe she babysat or it could be for her grandchildren, it wasn't really any concern to him.
Mrs.Binkley then asked if James could come upstairs so she could show him something. Once he entered the room he saw sesame street characters all over the walls, a wooden baby's crib in the corner, and a changing table fully stocked with disposable diapers, wipes, powder and lotion. Mrs.Binkley was standing next to the changing table and said to James, "Come on honey, it'll be fun for the both of us! Your mother thought it sounded like a great idea! I've missed what its like to care for a baby, I promise we'll have a good time". James didn't like what he was hearing at all, as he went to grab the door handle to leave the room he suddenly felt himself being swooped off his feet and carried over to the changing table. James didn't like what was happened at all and tried to wiggle free but it was helpless once he was tightly strapped to the changing table.
MommieSara

Post by MommieSara »

Another Great Story Line ritzcritz, I have a baby that I do very similar story lines with. Keep up the great writting!
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